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Bringing down my wall

My wall came down
The first time that I say you
Now I cant stop thinking of you
But all I want to do is tell you how much I care about you
How all I want to do is be by your side
But now I know I cant have you
Because your the prince that I want
But I am not your princess
For I am tainted and not pure
So I give up and there is nohing that I can do about it
So this is my last ode to you
But I do care and maybe one day I will be good enough for you

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  • xToxicxCupcakesx
    October 10, 2007
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    Aww this is good but you spelt and wrong on the last line!