Make love to me, darlin';
make my body move
Let my love enthrall your mind...
take me to ecstasy
Taste the essence that is me...
Seduce me as you do
my body aflame,
as I watch you excite me
Kindle in my body a fire;
I'm your lady for you to pleasure,
for you to please in every way
to taste, kiss and touch as you wish...
my body I surrender to your play
Taste the sweet wine of the rose..
tongue, teasing
as it flicks over my bud;
soft, yet slightly rough
as it circles again and again
you moan softly
To the pleasure of this bliss,
thrust in me the rapture
of you body's hottest flame;
take me to the pinnacle
again and again...
In a list
A contest entry
- Delightful Mood Swings Picture Prompt Contest by delightfulmess.
2100 points, ended October 21, 2007, 13 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Sex... Sex... Sex... by vortexsun.
1800 points, ended October 22, 2007, 37 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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omg i soooooo wish that i could:|
another outstandin poem you are awsome:| -
Been Here!!
I knew I had commented on this before
Congratulations on Your Trophy win and HM Beautiful
Wonderful piece with images You have weaved!!
Loved this!!
again
I'd give clappies but I gave them earlier
Oy!!
Thank You for sharing Your Talent!
Keep that quill dancing!
Best wishes to You in all You do
Many blessings too
and much love~ Desire~*~
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SSSSssssssss.......... awe... this was a warm and
very welcome seductive piece.... Excellent
Thank you for entering the contest
delila
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WOW
Beautiful
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Beautiful write. Seemed full of passion. The ending seemed to leave the reader wanting to read more. Good luck in the contest.
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lustfull poem. leaves the reader wanting.
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very nice and heated my friend. A delight to read. success in the contest.
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you did a great and wonderful job on this poem!!! it was wonderful!!! IT was also beautiful!!! Keep up the good work!!!
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Gosh, girlfriend! You always write such beautiful and passionate poetry! Enjoyed this so much....best of luck to you...smiles, Terry
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Wowzers!!
Holy Moly girly
I was just about to pick that picture too
My mind went wayward with the other picture
I had my eye on also
Love this piece You have penned
Takes the reader there and I kept one eye open...
Only one...
Scout's honor
Love it
Best wishes to You in the contest
Many blessings too
and much love~ Desire~*~
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you write these so beautifully!
Thank you for the sharing in the reading! -
OH" MY!...What a thrilling picture you have penned...Is it getting hot in here are is it just me?...Thanks love for sharing your hot little number with me and it has winner wrote all over it
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"my body I surrender to your play" was my most favorite part!
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Excellent
Oh my another sizzling poem full of such intensity and great images. Best of luck in the contest.
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You really cranked up the temperature in this piece! Delightful mood swings indeed...
Nice job & best of luck in the contest!
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