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Love for you

My passion for you is real
My love for you can't be sealed
I loved you once
I loved you twice
It's my fault that you're so nice
It's with you that I belong
No matter if your anger for me is strong
I told my frieds how I feel
She told me my love was real
But deep down in your heart
You want to admit your feelings to me
It can be love
It can be hatred
But I know that it will set you free

Please tell me what you think

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  • malevolent
    October 18, 2007
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    Wow! This is great! You have such outstanding talent! Keep up the good work!


  • Raven Tears gold member
    October 10, 2007
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    Well done on this beautiful write, I am so proud that you have found happiness, you deserve it.
    Love and Light always,

    ~Raven Tears~ (Tamara)
      @}~~~}~~~


  • DarkestRoseForever
    October 10, 2007

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    i agree... this is such an amazing write and i can really relate too. this is so beautiful... and it really made me feel better to... don't ever stop writing...


  • mari stevens
    October 10, 2007
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    awesom

    that was great i can relate to your poem thanks it made me feal better