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weird sensation

Time is running out
The end is near
My strength is failing
My mind is emptying
My desires are paling
My anger is shrinking
But my boobs are growing like mad and feel really strange. I wonder why..
Who needs them in the afterlife?

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  • xTomorrowx
    October 10, 2007

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    very well done on this! =)
    it's an excellent poem, and i agree with the below comments saying so...
    well written, thanks for entering and good luck in my contest! =)


  • arafura gold member
    October 10, 2007

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    failing...

    Your sadness and frustration really shows in this my dear! I hope life is not always so bleak? Well written work! Good luck in the contest!


  • Midnight-Engaged
    October 10, 2007
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    lol, puberty...gosh I hate it...nice piece!