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Always In My Heart

Listening to it thunder
Hearing the pitter patter of the rain
Like a tear drop from heaven
Erasing all of my pain

A silent reassurance
That I must keep you
Forever and always
No matter what I must do

Only in my arms
Always in my heart
Kept fresh in my mind
Never to be apart

Sharing a forever
Remembering the past
Sharing each day
That always goes by so fast

Never enough time
To just hold each other
Always on the go
To somewhere or another

So just once
Take a moment from your day
To step back into my arms
To never go away
By: SLD August 4, 2003

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Written August 4th, 2003

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  • firesprite2283
    March 4, 2005
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    beautiful girl just absolutley beautiful..loved it..like how you thought back on a relationship and want to take the time to step back a little bit and just live in the moment..great write

  • TimDiVito
    January 3, 2004
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    Beautiful

    This is truly beautiful Sonya, filled with romantic images. Excellent poem. Sweet Dreams to you. Tim


  • Kalexi
    November 6, 2003
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    Truly Beautiful!!!!!!!!

    Sweetness and sincerity straight from your heart

    Take care,

    Karen

  • Jenn Lynn
    November 3, 2003
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    Gurl, I can tell exactly what you are trying to say here, and it seems that it relates to everything that has been going on recently. By now you know my new name, and I promise I won't slack off this time! lol, keep up the great work, you truly are talented, and I have so much respect for that. Great work,
    Love Always, ~Jemm

  • FromTheAshes
    November 2, 2003
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    aww thats such a sweet poem its so pretty, love the rhythm and the rhyming, beautiful write


  • x best 0f me 41
    October 22, 2003
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    hey good poem u can tell ur intence feelings

  • Dozaschick14
    October 22, 2003
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    HOW ARE YOU WELLI LIKE YOUR POEMS


  • October 18, 2003
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    i really like your poem especially the last line. if my ex where to come back to me then i would never part from him but i guess he is too hurt to do so. very great write.


  • October 14, 2003
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    this is super cute. you are such an aweosme poet. So much better than me. Though i can really connect to the things you write about. Pure talent you have through words! I liked where you said "sharing a forever" neat way to put it. and also i thought the last lines were very effective in ending it in a positive note. Nice write! Keep posting! Thank you for writing this piece!

    *~ILISSA~*


  • moonlitmirror
    October 12, 2003
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    "Listening to it thunder
    Hearing the pitter patter of the rain
    Like a tear drop from heaven
    Erasing all of my pain"
    What a beautiful way to start a poem! Thats really great! I liked this a lot, but lol, it made me feel really single lol. Oh well, its still a really nicely done piece, I wish I could rhyme lol. Thanks for sharing..

    ~*~blessings~*~

    ~rora


  • Arslongavitabre1
    October 12, 2003
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    beautiful passionate sweet lovely innocent perfect...lol lots of words but it was nice i loved it
    Tate


  • bootz
    October 11, 2003
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    good job

    I feel that you want to take hold of every moment. This what seems like to me. Sounds very lovely, and carefuly set. Good job.
    ~scotty


  • CherryRain
    October 11, 2003
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    Very sweet and passionate. I love it. The best part is that its not mushy. Its real.

    Gives one something to think about in our own relationships, as we think about the fact that at some time or another, as one becomes comfortable with the other, we take for granted that the other will be there when we finally find time to spend with them... Though we ourselves long for the constant companionship when we are available.

    Peace - Love - Happiness


  • Prism
    October 10, 2003
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    "So just once
    Take a moment from your day
    To step back into my arms
    To never go away"

    yeah, yeah, exactly... i have something to say to a certain somebody i know cough, cough. he needs to stop for an evening and just hang out.
    Edited on Oct 10, 3:11 p.m. because ''.


  • Bluestar
    October 7, 2003
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    Beautiful, truely beautiful. You're right, people need to slow down once in a while and just look at the special people they have in their life, and take time to show this love - excellent work
    Much love to you
    ~*blue*~
    xxx xxx

  • ThisIsNOTDrea
    October 6, 2003
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    I really liked this poem...keep up the good writings and never stop...you are one hella writer..better then me
    -Drea

  • SassyPassions
    October 6, 2003
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    Wow... thats an amazing write. A piece I enjoyed reading. In fact... I enjoyed it so much I am going to go back and read it again. I guess I understand and relate so well because Im going through it at the moment... but anyhoo... Great write. I found it amazing. Dont stop writing.. you write amazingly.

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