if things keep going the way they are
wat choice will i have but to let you go
why cant you just do what you know you have to
what you have to do in order to save us
i just dont understand
if you love me then why are you putting me through all this
i'm ready to just forget
forget every thing and just runaway
would you even try to find me if i did
or would you not give a shit at all?
would you stop me,
would you runaway with me?
what would you do,
to keep me with you?
Author notes
Option 4
A contest entry
- Random Options by Megan Awesome.
470 points, ended November 1, 2007, 23 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
wat ya think?
Comments
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would you runaway with me?
what would you do,
to keep me with you?
THIS is my favorite part. This poem is so sad, but I love it. I love the way you wrote it and the flow and everything! The only prob;em is that I was looking for a love poem, and I think this is leaning a little more towards a break up poem. But this is still an amazing poem. Thank you for entering my contest and good luck!!!
Megan -
this is very good ur good at this stuff but me no lol ur way better than me so dont worri about it i loved it
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