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Sin


One kiss and our fate was sealed
together forever as the night is revealed
an unmarked grave holds beauty so true
her soul echos a life of gloom.
Desire for flesh revealed grace in the
your warm embrace invited me
lost in each others lustuous play
taste of loves wine ended all day.
Elegance in every curve you showed
skin like snow as your blood flowed
warmth once radiated with every embrace
now frozen still under black lace.
Sin revealed love to me
more beautiful is deaths bride to be
we will feast on lifes wine
the world is ours to dine.

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  • Tarja
    October 15, 2007

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    Wow... dark beauty is always the best!I really loved the beginning...

    "One kiss and our fate was sealed
    together forever as the night is revealed
    an unmarked grave holds beauty so true"

    Nicely done! Keep it up.


  • InMyFlames
    October 11, 2007
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    HA i speak only the truth


  • InMyFlames
    October 10, 2007
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    SEHR GUT (very good) ha ha im in a german mood sorry