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Him


Hair standing on the back of your neck
eyes felt watching, you feel vexed
a cold breeze surrounds only you
you see danger all around and few
questioning everything offered
these emotions make you suffer
paranoia settles in
pain and anguish again and again
eyes see shadows move and play
life is short and frayed
its everywhere and in everything
who is next the raven sings
feared by many, accepted by some
his time has finally come
you can not run, you can not escape
In the end, this is everyones fate
breath fast, breath slow
fight if you wish, or just let go
this is death, he comes for us all
what would you do
when he answers the call?

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  • SHadowHex666
    December 19, 2007

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    great

    this was exactly what i was looking for in my contest.
    keep up the great work .by the way i could feel the fear in this poem thanks for entering.