I can easily fuck myself to death
with phallic thoughts of suffering;
a scorched earth policy,
my visage, a fetid landscrape
celebrating the euphoric affliction of evil.
Author notes
Written for picture prompt: http://allpoetry.com/images/ext/Contest/2372/856.jpg?1192016194
Just incase anyone is wondering "Landscrape" is intentional and is not a typo.
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Nice and pleasant, very raw imagery here 'fuck myself' is very rough, but shows the extremity of this short and abrupt piece, nicely done.
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Thanks. I totally forgot about this piece, it is one of a few pieces I have that I always meant to do a longer version of, so I'll need to have a wee think on it and try and expand it.
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Is uphoric meant to be euphoric?
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Thank you. Yes, it is, I don't know why spellcheck didn't pick up on that (nor my eyes). It's been playing funny buggers of late.
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Lmao! Sorry but that's a tad dark, even for a Glaswegian!!! Nevertheless the last three lines are exellent, even though exeedingly gloomy and negative. lol
Peace Georgia
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Never been too prone to profanity, but your second line was eye catching - thank you for the entry
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Thank you. There was no other word I could have used there that would create the impact and the image I was going for, sorry.
Still, once I get started, I usually get going right into a massive flow, so it's surprising it's only one use of profanity and not littered with it lol.
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