A twinkling light in the stars above
Burns as brightly as our love.
Crashing waves upon the shore,
You are all that I've asked for.
Moonlit walks upon the beach,
In my heart, your name has seeped.
Footprints marked into the sand,
Knowing our love shall expand.
Gentle breeze blown through the grass,
Extends for as long as our love will last.
Blossoms bloom on cherry trees,
As wondrous as your love for me.
A calming song sung by the birds,
Our love continues to shock the world.
Two stars joined oh so near,
With your love, I have no fear.
The twinkling light cast upon the shore,
Universal Love which lasts forever-more.
Author notes
I tried to go with a Nature, Love, sequence, but it didn't turn out so well. =/ Definitely not my best piece.
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I really enjoyed it, it flowed smoothly and the rhyme was spot on. Imagery portrayed is awesome. A gorgeous read, beautifully penned
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Real Nice.
I found this poem to be very well done and so peaceful. I could just feel the oneness with the universe within this. I particularely liked the use of nature that you used in describing that kind of love it is something that all can relate to. Everything in this poem speakes to me of how I feel about my husband. You need to write more of this kind of poetry as you have done a marvolous job on this. I truely liked this.
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Thank you for a very inspiring and thoughtful entry. These are the best lines for me:
Footprints marked into the sand,
Knowing our love shall expand.
Gentle breeze blown through the grass,
Extends for as long as our love will last
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