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Passionate Pain..




Winter twilight,
knots solitude
pain of passion
calm, silence,
no answers !
staring blues of loafer clouds;
the blue moon, 
eyes felt a snowy tear 
smiling, having pleasure..
tears of passion.

Pain, no explanation.
How to define
only to feel,
to know.
 
Want to know ?
a heat, the jitters,
dunes on desert sand,
solitude of sea-heart
suffering, spilling, weeping, inviting echoes.

moonlight, passionate,
blue wave, whispers,
mysteries of passionate love.




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  • xTomorrowx
    October 10, 2007

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    i like this, i don't think i've read anything like this, it's definitely something new for me =)
    thanks heaps for entering and good luck! =)