took care
of my will, thought, acts,
accommodated.
don't know how?
even feel. hardly born.
Oh...so unfortunate
freed from care
like a boat to drift,
feeling life
expressionless moments.
suddenly, felt
not survived
just astonished.
'ccause did not manage to live before,
had to happen?
don't know.
You came...
from where
appeared...
looked in eyes,
a voice
music to ears
simple contact of hands
shuddering
feeling love
notice
shine in light
in stars
breeze, sweet caress
twilight, bright blessing.
smiling
not recognizing myself
felt a love
with you...
intimately connected
strange inexplicable knot.
mystery of love born inside soul.
Author notes
A contest entry
- From the Heart (Contest 2,000 points!) by PerVirtuous.
1700 points, ended October 25, 2007, 16 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Show me Love by Fixing Tomorrow.
1000 points, ended December 18, 2007, 19 entries
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