If it was you...
Could I believe that you are
Who you've said you'll be
Who you promised to become
The person you want to be?
If it was you...
Could I share my world with you
Could you make me smile
Could you make me laugh
Would I feel at ease?
If it was you...
Will you become what you can
Live to your greatest potential
Become the happiest person alive?
If it wasn't you...
I wouldn't be here writing about it.
Author notes
... this doesnt particularly evoke a time or place, but it's light hearted and soft and almost loving or admiring ... enjoy
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- Make Me Forget by Suzanne Dia.
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This is tender and sweet. Thank you.
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