I want to feel your touch,
and kiss your tender lips.
I want you oh so much,
give you nibbles and nips.
I want your strong arms,
to hold me very tight.
Scare away all harm.
to keep me safe all night.
Love me like no other,
take me into your heart.
like sister and brother,
our hearts shall never part.
A contest entry
- PASSIONATE LOVE by Expression.
575 points, ended October 15, 2007, 11 entries
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Please tell me what you think
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I know what you mean....welll at least I used to..very good piece I love that with only a few lines you grabed a bunch of emotions and placed them here great job
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I think you have definately expressed what passionate love is between two lovers. I like the way this poem made me feel and the feelings of love and warmth that it caused inside of me. Thank you for a delightful read. You certaintly have a way with words. You definately held my attention from beginning and end and left me wanting more.
~Midnight Lace -
awwww beautiful poem here you have written my dear. I still wish my ex would do this to me but I guess I have to learn to let go. I'm sam by the way. Anyways, I liked this poem alot.
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Lovely
words of love spoken with such charm
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Sweet Pleas
I like how your heart speaks through your poetic pen within.. Thanks for sharing you, and I wish you all the best within the contest!
Peace, Timothy aka poeticweaver~ 
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this is very nice ,,,i think most people could relate to the second stanza..which i have to say i like the best
Much Luv
♥kaila♥ -
Very tender!
Pleasant and very tender and appealing! I loved the flow, and the rhyme!
Lovely poem!
God bless you!
~ James ~
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