Why do I try to go on with the pain of life
Should I Just put a smile to my face and just embrace.
This blade is all that I have left it cuts with very little trace
Unlike my life that I wish I can just erase with this sharpen knife.
Day after day month and years past quickly by
Waiting for this one special moment that comes to you
I don’t even see it in my sight to view
How long do I wait for peace to say bye and die
Why cant life be a view of a beautiful light
Laugh pain away and fake my smile
Don’t want people share this vile pain
This path is one big fright
I can’t and won’t hold this a second more
Can’t just laugh off the pain anymore
Author notes
Nate
A contest entry
- [Pain] by whiterabbit..
360 points, ended October 14, 2007, 40 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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aww that is very sad. but deep. great piece you have here. good luck on it. it turned out very good.
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I like this a lot and I really like the emotions that you displayed. The last two lines are so true for so many. Great job and thanks for your entry.
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Hm. Hm.Hm.Hm.I just noticed it was for a contest,but besides that i liked this poem and the fact that it says "I can’t and won’t hold this a second more
Can’t just laugh off the pain anymore" though am wondering if it was written for personal reasons or ONLY for the contest.Night Natie.
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It was both really
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