I want to step inside your skin
I want to be yang to your yin
Even when tears slide off your chin
I want to step inside your skin.
Flow your shivers to my breathing
Let my whispers stop your bleeding
Although torture keeps stampeding
I want to step inside your skin
If the desert comes reclaiming
When the sickness comes inflaming
With the dusk cutting and maiming
I want to step inside your skin
I want to be a man desired
I know I am a taste acquired
Much as the search has made you tired
I want to step inside your skin
Please tell me what you think
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WOW........... This piece is full of passion...........Nice pennn
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em uhh the jury is still out on this one
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Really good! I dont know why but it reminds me a bit of adrian mole...
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the rhyming flowed very well... i like this a lot, very intriguing.
well done, thanks for sharing!!
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verry well writing twisted indeed i liked this a lot (:
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twisted and beautiful. well done
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I am usually not a fan of this kind of rhyming but this was just amazing! The flow is perfect and the originality is stunning. I love it. Very very well done!
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