daisy dark
in centered sorrow
pushes petals out
to catch the dew
white with wishing
for tomorrow
sipping love anew
In a list
A contest entry
- Quickie ~ 10,15,20 by Lavender Butterfly.
390 points, ended October 10, 2007, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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a sense here of hope, fervent perhaps...the kind that rises from a deep feeling...PK
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Yes, fervent hope... life and growth depend upon it. Thanks so much for your thoughts.
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The rhyme within your words is wonderfully elegant. You keep your words minimal and still that say so much. A delicate elegance that not many can accomplish.
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Rhythmic and serene. Well express!
Keep on writing
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Such beautiful rhythm and expression within your words. Thanks so very much for sharing... x Love and light, ButterflySecrets.
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