Innocence is-
the true adjective-
of a child.
Happiness,
and sweetness-
are its synonymns.
Found-
in its grace-
of life.
Author notes
"Adamas" is the greek word for Diamond
A contest entry
- Quickie ~ 10,15,20 by Lavender Butterfly.
390 points, ended October 10, 2007, 8 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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A grammar lesson and a meaningful poem in one? My English teacher would melt with joy.
Reading this made me smile. Great write and congrats on the silver!
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This is a beautiful poem. In this poem you used words like an artist uses his/her brush in a great painting. Well done and congratulations on the silver!
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So well written...Like how you used grammar to prove your point!
Congrats on the silver!
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Now I'v learned a new word too... diamonds are so familiar to us here in South Africa. Lovely poetry that speaks right to my social worker's heart.
~ Nicolette
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Simply beautiful
You've captured the picture perfectly
~sugar~
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Very beautiful and creative indeed! Thanks so very much for sharing... x Love and light, ButterflySecrets.
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where r u....
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Just give me a few minutes. I logged out for a few minutes. I am so sorry.
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