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each petal holds a promise
held between youth's fingers
wished for with yearning lips
and realized in eyes of dreams 



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  • Virgoan
    October 10, 2007

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    succinct piece! Beautiful my friend

    Keep writing.

    VIRGOAN


  • ten thousand cicadas gold member
    October 10, 2007

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    Pretty little piece. Aren't our eyes so expectant when we're young? I like how you say the promises are realized in the dreams; that was really lovely.


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    October 9, 2007

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    This is just simply divine!!! Thanks so very much for sharing... x Love and light, ButterflySecrets.


  • crimsondew
    October 9, 2007
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    Beautiful...
    All the best!