Sketchy grey shade of fate
hit like tsunamic waves,
inky bloom,
olive topping,
ray of hope,
better days for sure.
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A contest entry
- Quickie ~ 10,15,20 by Lavender Butterfly.
390 points, ended October 10, 2007, 8 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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beautiful imagery...definitely deserved bronze!
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I feel like this built right from the beginning and blossomed at the end with its full meaning (I just had to work the flower metaphor in there because of the picture ). The hopefulness really worked with the child image. Speaking of children, the girl in your avatar is absolutely adorable. Great write!
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Thanks a lot for your lovely words....That little girl is my daughter
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flowing imagery of the river.
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Thanks
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I love this wow oh wow you done a great job with this piece and you won bronze congrats.Much love and best wishes
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Glad you liked it so much...You know I wrote this in such a hurry, just a couple of minutes because my father wanted to use the system. I did not even read it whole after writing it ..lol... It is a good thing it turned out fine
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I like the grayness of this write. Beautiful!
VIRGOAN
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Glad you enjoyed it!
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Profound, beautiful, creative... Excellent write!
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Thanks a lot!
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Truly creative, captivating and flowing with immense imagery. Loved it! Thanks so much for sharing... x Love and light, ButterflySecrets.
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Glad you enjoyed..I liked the sketch!
Happy judging!
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