once my life was morbidly incomplete,
until that night I felt your prickly heat.
from the dark you appeared, enshrined in lace,
moon's ivory shadows upon your face.
your beauty causing my soul to suspire,
creating endless dreams of love's desire.
emerald green stars reflected from your eyes,
as my fingers deftly explored your thighs.
recumbent together doing our thing,
our tongues creating new linguistic string.
as scintillate starlight revealed your charms,
creating passionate need of my arms.
inhaling your breath from those lovely lips,
warm palms slowly caressing sexy hips.
here in the dark, inducements of pleasure,
memories of which, we'll always treasure.
you knew I loved you from the beginning,
while odd confusion kept my mind spinning.
Cassiopeia, my charming lover,
my love of you took time to discover.
yet now your lovely eyes have made me whole,
staring out from the ~catwalk ~of my soul.
Author notes
for an Angel, my Cassiopeia
A contest entry
- From the Heart (Contest 2,000 points!) by PerVirtuous.
1700 points, ended October 25, 2007, 16 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Nice work. I likey.
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Very luxurious in it's rhythm and voice.
I thought the ending line exquisite.
And Cassiopeia is such a lyrical name,
full of sensual promise. Blue
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Very beautiful..Excellent image
from the dark you appeared, enshrined in lace,
moon's ivory shadows upon your face.
your beauty causing my soul to suspire,
creating endless dreams of love's desire.
emerald green stars reflected from your eyes,
I adore these lines..
Thank you for sharing..smiles
Peace
~A~
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