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Your hands search
Your lips kiss me
incessantly

I need you to know
I love you so
Please don't ever go,
and leave me in this cold world alone


My darling,
in your jade eyes I see forever
Take me
Love me
Never, say we aren't forever



Love,
no one knows one like ours
When I'm with you
I'm higher than the stars

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  • Darkslight
    October 11, 2007
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    Brill

    Awww. This is so lovely. I really like this one. I WANT LOVE! lol


  • FaeryMouse
    October 10, 2007
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    Thats really good sweety........keep up the work......


  • voodoo ink Greeters member
    October 9, 2007

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    Wow..those first lines are powerful..I love them..they stick out to me...keep up the flow, even when you don't feel like writing, write...It is hard, but it plants your mind to create...