Your hands search
Your lips kiss me
incessantly
I need you to know
I love you so
Please don't ever go,
and leave me in this cold world alone
My darling,
in your jade eyes I see forever
Take me
Love me
Never, say we aren't forever
Love,
no one knows one like ours
When I'm with you
I'm higher than the stars
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Brill
Awww. This is so lovely. I really like this one. I WANT LOVE! lol

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Thats really good sweety........keep up the work......


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Wow..those first lines are powerful..I love them..they stick out to me...keep up the flow, even when you don't feel like writing, write...It is hard, but it plants your mind to create...





