In amazement I look at your picture
knowing that you’ve seen your life in mine
Now that you’re gone I lovingly remember
the wisdom you gave while our lives entwined
Author notes
Quicky 30 Worder
Picture Prompt of GreyMouser's Great Grandparents!
A contest entry
- 10,30,30 PIF quickie by Grey Mouser.
600 points, ended October 10, 2007, 7 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Oh you Smarty Pants!
You are so darned good at quickie poems and I am such a dud. You could probably win on a TV game show, too.
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Beautifully spoken from a beautiful heart Bro, love you always your Sister Sugar Lips
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Timeless moments where the present and the past join to bless the now with knowledge garnered over the years. Very wonderful write and many thanks for honoring their memories with your entry.
Be well and be blessed,
Mouser -
Beautifully tender so few words saying so much, a lovely take on the picture, good luck in this contest.
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awesome job hun and the memories made that shall be cherished for a eternal lifetime xxx well done and many loving blessings always xxx
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