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Ocean Motion(Tanka)

frothy ocean waves
crash upon the sandy strand
quickly back they flow
to reform and crash once more
again and again, repeat

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  • PassionsPromise gold member
    October 22, 2007
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    Great imagery and sweet form. Loved it.
    Greatjob and best wishes.
    Congrats on your HM.
    Tory


  • delightfulmess silver member
    October 17, 2007

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    What a tanka WOW love this
    Excellent imagery.
    Thank you for entering the contest


    delila


  • maggiejamespoet silver member
    October 10, 2007
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    This is a delightful tanka--love it! It makes me homesick for the ocean. Good luck in the contest!


  • azure85 gold member
    October 9, 2007

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    What a pretty tanka, it flows like the ocean waves. I really like your last line, to show the ocean waves coming back.