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My "Where Oh Where" Triolet

Where oh where is that contest judge
oh where oh where could he be?
He needs (me-thinks) a good kick or nudge.
Where oh where is that contest judge?

Perhaps he's feeding his face with fudge,
crawled in a hole or climbed up a tree!

Where oh where is that contest judge
oh where oh where could he be?

Author notes

________________
Now git the dangblasted contest judged,
you moron.. it's been 3 weeks!! lol

Triolet Contest: must begin with "Where Oh Where" & be humorous.

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Comments

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  • Pamela A Lamppa silver member
    December 4, 2008

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    How does one not chuckle with this one? Excellent triolet. So much so that the words flow and one barely notices the form.

    I adored it. So pleased to see a trophy here. So pleased to read your beautiful poetry. ~Pamela


  • ghostwriter28
    March 12, 2008
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    very awesome

    I liked this poem a lot It made me laugh really hard great job!!!!


  • Nicotine Eyes
    November 8, 2007
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    wow
    this was an awesome write.
    Gratz on the silver


  • captain howdy
    October 31, 2007
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    haha! This is so adorable! Grats on your silver!

  • Trevor Hadley
    October 27, 2007
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    Very amusing.

    You made me laugh. Thanks.


  • Griswold silver member
    October 14, 2007

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    ROFL, good one, worthy indeed of the Coveted Silver chalice, the Authors notes are good too. Well done...Scott

  • Billbard silver member
    October 14, 2007

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    Thanks muchly for your entry in my where oh where Triolet contest.Form requirements have been met.A very humorous poem you have penned.


    • ma belle
      October 14, 2007
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      Thank you so much for the silver trophy. The contest was a hoot.. some very cute entries! It was fun playing. Belle


  • Lady Eventide
    October 10, 2007

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    Wow. You are really good at writing these forms. I should take lessons or something...I don't have a clue as to how to do a triolet.

    Well done...really funny...especially those author notes.

    Good job. All the best.


  • Kiran silver member
    October 10, 2007

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    A brilliant, funny triolet! You made this flow so well. An excllent piece, I loved this.


  • Blushfulmoon silver member
    October 9, 2007

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    too cute~

    Thank you for the chuckle sweet sis
    I needed this so..and well don't that beat it all sweet sis
    Best of luck in the contest...this is a winner in my book
    Hugs
    Your Ky sis
    Susan~~~


  • going nowhere
    October 9, 2007
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    oh.. i was laughing the whole way through.... haha...


  • CitrineSunrise silver member
    October 9, 2007

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    This short verse describes one of my peeves. Sometimes judges will wait forever to judge a contest. All the while they are submitting new contests and writing poems. Very cleverly written. Good luck in this contest. Peace, Liz


  • azure85 gold member
    October 9, 2007

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    LOL This is so funny, what a great triolet! I bet the fudge was too much to pass up! A great triolet, O Queen!

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