austere lines and
rigid postures;
but with rosy cheek,
softened eyes,
gentle arm around—
portrayed is love that lasts
beyond staging.
nothing more
than eternity
nothing less
than this instant.
Author notes
Lovely picture.
A contest entry
- 10,30,30 PIF quickie by Grey Mouser.
600 points, ended October 10, 2007, 7 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Telling of times gone by with a very wonderful touch.
Loved the last two lines, very well done and many thanks for entering into the contest.
Be well and be blessed,
Mouser -
well done on how the first stanza portrays the wonderful couple within the image and uniting them with the second stanza portraying them as the beautiful and compassionate couple they were, renewing special memories to last a lifetime for scott and daveand the rest of their families. many blessings always xx
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Nicely written for this picture. It's a Kodak moment!!!
Great soft write for my grandma's pic. I dont recall ever seeing it before today...Scott
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