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Falling

Fall into my arms
Listen to my song
Let me into your heart
My own need to belong

You read me very well
I'm learning to read you too
I cuddle close to you
A balm when I am blue

So please don't break my heart
I couldn't stand it again
You are not the last guy
Just hold me 'til the end

I'm falling in love with you
Or so it seems to me
We could be happy together
And happy just to be

Author notes

I'm so crazy, but whatever. hope you like it!

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  • princessarya
    January 12, 2008
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    yeah, that third stanza mentions Owen, who cheated... talk about heartbreak! no one deserves that and i have to wonder why me?. i have the world's biggest heart... *sigh* but, thank goodness i'm starting get over him as i fall even more in love with will lol. so how are you?


  • Ted E Bare gold member
    December 20, 2007

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    I hope your heart won't be broken either. It's the chance we all take when we do "fall" in love.I have experienced heartbreak several times and I know it sucks. Thisis why I hope you will always be lucky in love. I want to thank you for entering my "Invite Only; Me On Their List" contest.

    Ted E

    PS: Once I have commented on all of your entries, then I will reread them all and choose the one that will be brought forward for being selected as Gold, Silver, Bronze or HM.


  • BroRoger
    October 10, 2007
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    Good job! I like this write. It rhymes well and has a good emotion to it.