She rest upon my shoulders
and tugs at my heart on the
avenues of sweet exchange.
My best friend,
she kisses me in liquid motion.
I feel her affections like
cooling winds upon my parched face.
My temples release the tension
of a thousand vexations.
As she calmly soothes me
with her words of yes.
I hear her in moments of idleness
like the gods of antiquity.
Revealing revelations of ecstasy
to my awakening soul.
I ascend to her in flights of
wondrous splendor and we
embrace and kiss.
The thunder roars in
exhilerating jubilation.
Capturing our love in dimensions
of complete madness.
She is miracles and dancing.
Stardust and fascination.
Mesmerizing my every thought.
Her eyes blush in heavenly
shades of paradise.
As I sing rhapsodies of earnest
surrender.
Touched by the beguilement
of her radiant charms of love.
A contest entry
- From the Heart (Contest 2,000 points!) by PerVirtuous.
1700 points, ended October 25, 2007, 16 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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This is simply romantic and sweetly warm. This piece potrays how love has captured your heart and thw way you blissfully melt..Good luck in the contest!
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very well expressed emotions delivered in this piece you always have a way of capturing the right moment
julia
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Words of beauty flow from your mouth! Something I needed to read. So soft and beautiful. Thanks for commenting on my poem!
... And good luck in this contest! You've got my vote!!!
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Beautifully romantic
That is SOME love poem. Amazingly beautiful. Rhapsodies of earnest surrender. WOW. Truly a beauty my friend. Truly a beauty. ~Pamela
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this is beautiful....
it really is.
Lane
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Good job, Darell
Wonderful imagery in this write. And, BTW, I know who you're talking about...
Your friend,
Brazos
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gorgeous piece
My temples release the tension
of a thousand vexations.
As she calmly soothes me
with her words of yes.
I hear her in moments of idleness
like the gods of antiquity.
Revealing revelations of ecstasy
to my awakening soul.
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beautiful photo and poem
are you speaking for the love of a bird?
Weither you are or weither you are not, the poem is love at its best.
Smile,
Judy
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Gold
the way this poem is written, the words chosen to capture the emotion, the way they are place, its golden! this poem is perfect, a true honor to poets all around. it captured me from beginning to end. please write more! brilliant job!
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Awww, this is cute. And a very good write. You have some talent. I really like this My favorite part was.
"She rest upon my shoulders
and tugs at my heart on the
avenues of sweet exchange.
My best friend,
she kisses me in liquid motion.
I feel her affections like
cooling winds upon my parched face.
My temples release the tension
of a thousand vexations.
As she calmly soothes me
with her words of yes."
The beginning got me more than the rest.
But good job.
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