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Don`t Care

Can you smell the poverty
when your neighbour cooks?
Can you feel a bitter taste
how his children look?

Do you see the creeping fog
stinking night and day
poverty walks through the road
and what do you say?

When money is around your home
it`s better not to see
might be you would spend too much
to make your conscience feel free...

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  • OnlyOneLifeToLive
    October 9, 2007

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    Very nice. I do like this. Very unique. I'm glad you wrote about something different than the average person usually does. Great job! Thanks for entering!


  • light to a dreamer gold member
    October 9, 2007
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    Very good work and very true in so many ways Much Luck to you.