Powerful
Hands
No pains,
control, or abuse
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Comforting,
sharing, protecting
Touching warmth
Loving pleasure
Author notes
Septolet:
The Septolet is a poem consisting of seven lines containing fourteen words with a break in between
the two parts. Both parts deal with the same thought and create a picture.
A contest entry
- Delightful Shortforms by delightfulmess.
1200 points, ended October 21, 2007, 19 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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First time I read one of these, but enjoyed it...Very different. ~Stacey
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this indeed a wondeful form and you did it justice with your words. Can see why it stole the gold.
great job and congrats.
tory
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Tory
Thanks sooooooo much again for your sweet comments. I was
to get the GOLD! There were so many wonderful writes.
Many blessing,
David -
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hey you where just lucky i wasnt in it lol
j/k was worthy of it dear.
Tory
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Oh yes.... now this is a marvelous Septolet.
Excellent.. Thank you so much for entering the contest
delila
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wow great write all the best
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My Angel ♥
This reminds me of you !
No more hands of abuse touch me only love and tender care
I love you my husband
I also love this different style Different and cool
BEST of luck in the contest
Stay safe
I love you
~Manda
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Good Work
I like this alot and know it is hard to find all this in one person much less ourselves. very nice work and good luck to you.
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Thanks again for the kind, encouraging comments. I feel that this image can be taken in many ways. I chose to show the Hands not as abusive but as loving and caring. Glad you liked it Looking forward to reading your writes as well.
take care,
David
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