Man-made currency of pain,
Only there to create divisions,
Never the solution to a problem,
Even causes loneliness, doesn't matter
Young or old, all are affected.
Going to bring WW3,
Rounding our minds to narrowness,
Obviously our faults
When money took over the world,
So many people died of famin.
One day someone decided to chop a tree,
Now money exists as our earth dies.
Thousands go hungry,and the
Reality is that money is our new god,
Entering this world children are taught
Every one needs money,
Silly notions and stupid rules.
Money Grows On Trees!
Author notes
hope you enjoyed, sry if it now wat you wanted...could have been better,
A contest entry
- Your Thoughts On Money by Cerulean Sunrise.
450 points, ended October 16, 2007, 11 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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ONLY an HM???
When this piece really strikes home???
I am shocked ~ this is gold to me.
I love the concept in this.. I agree full heartedly. I personally hate the idea of currency, but I admit that in our time, it's something needed. -shakes head-
Great write!
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thank you for your kindness, most of it is true, but hey the world isn't perfect no matter how much we think we try...and thank you for reading my work
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You're welcome. Thank you for your comment as well.
The world will never be perfect.. there always has to be a balance, both good and bad.. yet sometimes, things get way too out of hand.
You're welcome again, and thank you for your reads as well.
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This was great! you misspelled Famine.
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Great write. I really enjoyed it! Excelent preception, great concepts, perfect way to voice this very powerful opinion! Excelent job and good luck in your contest!
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