sleepy tones shadow fretful
indecision; in an induced haze:
ignore the world,
so ignorance can't find you.
and when no one knows your name,
you can blame it on purpose
instead of misfortune.
it’s not your fault,
that they missed out on
all that was you…
Author notes
A bit sarcastic? Some italics are in order.
A contest entry
- PIF ~*QUICKIE*~ by TwilightDazzles.
450 points, ended October 9, 2007, 7 entries
Honorable mention
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Comments
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I can sense the sarcastic tone of this. It's a very creative take on the prompt!! Excellent job, thanks for entering and best wishes in the contest
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