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The colors of a rainbow
engagingly dip into your mystic
bringing me a clearer picture
your essence, aura, physique
all of my senses being stirred
you're my whirlwind and hurricane
my daily fix
undulating revelry
unadulterated fantasy

One look into your eyes
catapults me into space
flushing my shivers
gripping delight
bottomless emotion
staking a claim

You in my memory
you in my vein
past all my levels
and heavy restraints

All I am asking is an eternity with you
It's the least I can ask for
it's my heart's dream
you've taken me captive
my hearts in the fray
my thoughts you have marked
stenciled in love's ink
there's no more mystery
you're the one...

I'll pay the fee!

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  • aliceramone
    October 9, 2007
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    exceptional imagery in this piece with great use of LAnguage...one of your best-a great write!


    • 2lullabyhaven
      October 9, 2007
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      OOhh Iggy such a fantastically fabulous review-thank you so muchlol