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Up Grows my Heart

Settling down in
calm
yielding to calamity
gone
peace waves her wand
of grace
blowing gentle my
healing heart.

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  • misticmoonlite gold member
    October 9, 2007
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    this is very good good luck..mm


  • whispernthedark Greeters member
    October 9, 2007

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    I really love your take on the prompt. Best of luck in the contest.
    "yielding to calamity", this poem really exudes the essence of lavender, that relaxation.


    whisper


  • TwilightDazzles
    October 9, 2007

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    Ohh very nice take. "Peace waves her wand of grace" Excellent line. Great job! Thanks for entering and best wishes in the contest