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Time Flies

I never liked it when time flies/so I got bored and shot the clock so I could kill time.

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  • Expression
    December 5, 2007

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    hmmm very creative lol...i'd blow the clock up but hey shooting it works just as well
    nicely done
    Much Luv
    ♥kaila♥


  • cgirl0410 silver member
    October 29, 2007

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    I really like this line. I think it would be cool to hear what happens when you killed time. Love to hear an expansion on this piece. But I really love it. It stands on it's on.


  • Freed by Mercy silver member
    October 28, 2007
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    Excellent play on words. I'd like to shoot the clock as well...


  • Lj-
    October 23, 2007
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    Interesting take on killing time.

    Thank you for entering,
    Good luck.


  • geminiblacc silver member
    October 12, 2007

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    I like it, usually when people say they need to kill or stop time, it's figuratively, but you use it in the most literal way possible in this write. Kudos.

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