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Do not Tremble

Do not tremble, do not tremble little flower,
I won’t pick you from this garden.
You are now just a blossom
I am an addicted wanderer

Ahead I see a path of stones
beneath a crimson horizon
behind a tree with many branches,
One gold fruit that never wanes.

I found ashes in a wooden plate
that tasted like the elysian nectar.
I rejoiced even when a breeze
scattered together fortune and ill fate.

I have the sovereignty of the old craft,
When flying I outrun the clouds
clutching them with my bare hands
building castles without any heft.

I pick now my walking stick
and I greet you with my old hat.
The next reunion will be among strangers
and this spring with be just an old trick.

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  • poetryality silver member
    October 15, 2007
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    Thank you so very much for this kind and wise words. You have touched my spirit with the mystery of the ancients. There is a splendid feel to this poetry. I am smitten with delight. Thank you ever so much poet. I almost feel like my ancestors have come back to urge me on. Beautiful! Thank you!


    Much Love ♥

    Renee


  • Mari Goes gold member
    October 10, 2007
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    Oh man from Minas Gerais, your message is very positive, colourful and up lifting.
    To see beauty and hope where we least expect is wonderful treat.
    this is a great poem and I the last stanza closes it with with a golden key.

    Obrigada por ter vindo