All I hear is the words coming from your mouth
I wish we could hold each other all night
I know the time is nearing for you to go
So i hold on tight and wish to not let go
Time starts to pass slow
And I still know I will have to let you go
So now I look at you
And wounder why you love me
I know that im perfect for you
But people try to stop us
I still hear the words coming from you
But I still wounder When this night will end
With in a minute you stand up
I stand up to
You get down on your knee
And say I love you
You pull out a ring and put on my finger
You stand up and wisper in my ear will you marry me
I start to cry
And I say of course
We lay back down and all I hear is
The Sweet Sweet Nothings of your voice
A contest entry
- PASSIONATE LOVE by Expression.
575 points, ended October 15, 2007, 11 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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"I start to cry
And I say of course
We lay back down and all I hear is
The Sweet Sweet Nothings of your voice"
this is the best part to me...your improving a quite a bit.. keep it up
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awww this is soo very sweet
awwwwwwwwwww
this is beautiful thank u for entering the contest
much Luv
♥kaila♥
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