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Fear

*Frightened heart, screams cried
*Eyes unsure, in darkness I hide
*Aching soul, my love tried
*Riveting pain, so empty inside











Please
I don't want to lose you

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I'm going crazy

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  • Ogreatbaldone gold member
    October 9, 2007

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    a lot of emotion in this short acrostic/monorhyme, contrary to your author notes, you are not going crazy, you just feel that way...peace Terry