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Night Flight

Frozen countryside
the song of white birds leaving
at a starry sky
I pray for peace and freedom
for your bombarded churches

A contest entry

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  • AndrewHide silver member
    October 10, 2007

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    The switch from the natural scene to the one which prompts your prayers is very startaling. Good and clever use of images and use of the tanka form.

    good luck in the contest.
    Andrew