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Blood Lust {revised}

Just at the edge of the shadows,

I stand.

Watching your movements.

Watching the emotions,

Change upon your handsome face.

Wishing.

Wanting,

For you to turn around;

And look in my direction.

The lust and the craving,

Tis nearly too much to handle.

I watch your back tense,

As shivers,

Roll down your spine.

I step out,

Beyond the shadows.

Into the dimly lit night.

Walking up behind you,.

Ever so silently.

I run a nail down your spine.

Purring softly next to your ear.

I can see,

Under the pale moonlight,

Your muscels bunch and tense;

Against my touch.

You turn sharpely.

And look down upon my face.

Your eyes register a hint of fear.

Oh! And such beautiful eyes they are!

Revealing your every emotion or thought.

They are such a soft, sea green.

Almost meltingly stunning.

Had I a heart,

It would have skipped a beat.

But I do not need your eyes,

To show me what you are thinking.

I can smell and sense,

The light stench of fear

And the over layer of sex,

Radiating from your soul.

I hear your heart,

Quicken and stutter.

I know the power of my ageless beauty.

So I give you a sly, knowing smile.

Brushing my Ebony curls,

Back over my shoulder.

Cocking my head to the side;

Keeping my gaze locked on yours.

Pursing my blood colored lips,

Into a saucy pout.

My rose colored eyes,

Reflect the tinted moonlight.

Seduction without words.

I move in closer to you.

Running my hand,

Down your sleeved shoulder,

To your hand.

Playing lightly with your fingers.

Instinctively,

You take a step back.

Breaking the contact.

Such a silly human response.

So I step with you.

Not allowing you an inch of room.

I know my eyes show,

That I have no fear of you.

They caress yours.

Sensual and sly.

While my hands again,

Roam over you.

Ever so softly.

So gently.

Until I feel your body give,

Under my coaxing fingers.

Taking that last step,

Into you;

Under this perfect, clear, star drenched sky.

Mumuring words in an ancient tongue.

Soothing your soul.

And bringing it closer to the surface.

Senseing you give in.

As you wrap your arms around me.

A light smile,

Plays across your lips,

As you look down on me.

I know that you think,

That on this all-so-dark night,

You'll be getting a joy ride.

From this dark and wanton princess.

But I know all too well.

That it'll not be a joy ride you've ever imagined.

A smile slips across my lips.

As I lead you on.

Playing gently with your thoughts.

Until I feel it's close enough.

Your soul let's off a tainted glow.

Tainted enough,

To bring a greedy smile to my face.

I lean in slowly.

Nudging your head,

Just slightly,

To the side.

And flick my tongue,

Along your neck once.

Then...

Without a seconds warning.

I sink my teeth into,

Your sensitive vein.

Your body goes taught.

And your fingers,

Dig into my waist.

But I hold fast,

To your broad shoulders.

Draining the life,

From your handsome form.

I feed,

Until your your heartbeat,

Is just a faint echo.

Then I let you go.

Stepping back.

My eyes aflame.

As you slide to the ground.

My lips burn.

And the blood from you,

Runs warmly down my chin,

To my silky neck.

Gasping for air.

Staring up at me.

Pure, petrified horror fills your eyes.

But there's an under layer of need,

Reflecting in the sea green.

And on a whim,

I decide I want to fill that need.

A wicked smile captures my lips.

You would make,

Such a fine mate.

The body of a warrior.

And in your eyes,

There's a hint of street smarts.

Intelligence and cunning,

Surround you

In an aura.

Brushing aside my velvet skirts.

I kneel before you.

Bareing my fangs for you to see.

I sink them,

Into my own wrist.

Holding my arm up,

Just above your lips.

Allowing the blood to drip down.

But holding it,

Just beyond your grasp.

A playful smile,

Creeps along my lips.

Almost childish.

Filled with glee and amusement.

A whimper escapes your throat.

Fear and want warring with each other.

The blood,

Leaves you wanting,

Craving,

Begging.

Whimpering,

And pleading for more.

After a moment,

Watching you drift closer

To the edge of death.

I bring my arm down,

So that your lips are against my skin.

You hesitate.

Then,

Like a starving child.

You drink the eternal life within me.

Throwing my head back,

A savage growl escapes my lips.

As the power of it,

Begins to take hold.

I pull you away.

Letting you lie back on the ground.

Whimpering and squirming.

I catch my breath.

Closeing my eyes,

As the wound heals.

Leaning down,

Close to you.

I lock my fire eyes with yours.

Whispering in a silky soft voice;

"You are now mine, Lover.

For all of time and past.

You belong to only me, My Lover.

Until time it's self runs out."

Pressing my wanton lips to yours.

Sealing the bind between us.

I stand slowly.

Taking a step back.

Keeping my eyes on yours,

For a moment longer.

I smile down at you.

And whisper to your mind.

"I will come for you,

Just before dawn, My Lover."

Turning,

I disappear,

Back into the shadows of the night.

Leaving you there.

To let your body die.

I know that your eyes,

Are on me until I fade from your veiw.

And a small, secret, smile,

Dances across my face.

You are mine this night.

This dark all Hallow's Eve.

My night.

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Comments

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  • CinnamonWolf
    February 22, 2008

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    enrapturing

    im not sure if its a werewolf or vampire.... but i thuroughly enjoyed reading this.

    it was polished and professional


    • irishmidnight
      February 23, 2008
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      **grins and blushes**

      Why thank you...!!!! It's a vampire....And I thourghly loved LOVED writing this one!! **laughs**


  • Southern Twilight
    October 14, 2007

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    What a perfect title for an amazing poem!

    I loved the story here, and there were so many lines that were so powerful and perfectly said, if not the entire piece! I really kept me reading, it held my interest till the end. Truly an amazing piece, well done!


    • irishmidnight
      November 27, 2007
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      withintheunknown

      Thanks hun!!! It's a long piece but it was a blast writing it!! I'm thrilled to hear that you enjoyed it!!


  • Knight70 silver member
    October 10, 2007

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    Deliciously deadly revision!!!!!


    After a moment,
    Watching you drift closer
    To the edge of death.
    I bring my arm down,
    So that your lips are against my skin.
    You hesitate.
    Then,
    Like a starving child.
    You drink the eternal life within me.
    Throwing my head back,
    A savage growl escapes my lips.



    Turning,
    I disappear,
    Back into the shadows of the night.
    Leaving you there.
    To let your body die.
    I know that your eyes,
    Are on me until I fade from your veiw.
    And a small, secret, smile,
    Dances across my face.
    You are mine this night.
    This dark all Hallow's Eve.
    My night.




    I am without words at how enticingly deadly this is. You turned up the suspense tenfold. This is still a very evocative piece that sends me into a horror euphoria. I love how you have the seductive vampiress leave her dead lover to die, as she lusts for her eternal mate within.

    ~Don
















    • irishmidnight
      November 27, 2007
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      Don

      My god hun you have a way with words even when you're just leaving a comment. Thanks for the praise and for the lift in my spirits!! I adore this poem. It was so much fun to write. I might have to do another here soon...lol..don't know as to when ill get it posted but i'll let you know!!! **hugs**


    • irishmidnight
      October 12, 2007
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      knight70

      you make my heart soar above the clouds with your words!! **hugs tightly**

  • near1202apocalypse
    October 9, 2007
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    Very sensual!!!

    This is brilliant! it made my heart race and picture you in a seducing way! Loved it babe!


  • HaleyMary
    October 9, 2007

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    this is fantastic. The imagery is awesome. Very dark, too and has a sense of danger in the poem. You're really good at writing the dark genre. Keep it up.


  • PastelMoons gold member
    October 9, 2007

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    Enthralling!
    Your imagery made this
    an awesome read..
    I love the character--
    her morbid desire and
    macabre nature..Spooky
    yet sultry and sexy.
    I love it!!
    ~Pastel

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