When the September nights have ended
once again we are reminded.
Autumn time is here again
as we see the golden grain.
Those leaves of gold and brown
one by one they flutter down.
Skies of blue,as morning breaks
Farmers working with backs that ache.
But soon it will be end of day
As harvest is over and it's time to play.
Author notes
I chose option 2. "For man, autumn is a time of harvest, of gathering together. For nature, it is a time for sowing, of scattering abroad" Edwin Way Teale
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Comments
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Impressive... this is great! I love how you describe fall in such an accurate way!
the only thing I would advise doing is making sure that your words actually rhyme if you are going to make each set of two lines rhyme. For example, "ended" and "reminded" and then "again" and "grain" don't rhyme. 
They end the same, but have different sounds. Other than that, great job! Thanks for entering and good luck!
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Hi:
This is a wonderful piece.....
Thank you for entering our contest,
and good luck to you.....
AngelicMistress...Tanya
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which suboption of option two??
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