Background music playing
Sipping on a glass of red wine
Its bouquet fills my senses
Guiding me gently down onto our sofa
Our shadows dance on the walls
Cast by the glow of the scented candles
Pulling me closer
Your breath brushes against my neck
Your lips caress
Smothering me in soft sensual kisses
Your feathery touch glides down my
alert tingling skin
Whispering sweet nothings your
Words play on my mind
As I inhale the warm heady aroma
of your cologne
Evoking in me thoughts of Africa
Where you came like a thief in the night
Capturing my mind, body, heart, and soul
I was your night time fantasy
Back to reality you slide yourself
between my moisture sated thighs
Craving me you lick your lips
Raising my hips I allow you in further
Needing me to feed your hunger
You devour me knowing I've got a
taste you can't resist
A contest entry
- PASSIONATE LOVE by Expression.
575 points, ended October 15, 2007, 11 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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i like your poem its very personal
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Thanks annabel
glad you enjoyed
Love suagr
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this was very well drenched in the right words i think you did a excellent job stroking the magical words for this
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Thank you for reading
Always appreciated
~sugar~
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I sense a feeling of past lives spinning around each other, the desires and dreams rising almost like a smoke screen. A sense of kismet and a waiting. While feeding his needs yours wait for him to wake up.
Love, Tom B.
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You felt it right Tom B
Appreciate you reading
Love ~sugar~
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Very hot, Michelle
But wait, I've never been to Africa!! Hmmmmmmm, you cheatin' on me girl?
Very vivid picture of a night of love. I thought it flowed beautifully, and your excellent imagery allowed me to see everything.
I wouldn't change a thing.
Love,
Brazos
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Hey B
As always your comments are valued and appreciated
Me cheat on you B, never
Love ~sugar~
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holy shit ! congrads its hypnotic with passion and romance that a girl i love how you get down and do poetry buisness i am happy for you sug
juju
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A pleasure to have you read as always
Love ~sugar~
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the ending - it makes it for me!
hell yes!
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Appreciate you reading
~sugar~
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smoking again, sis *stansmoking*
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Appreciate you always
~sugar~
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WOOO! I was intrigued by the title and swallowed by the words! This was hot!!! "I was your night time fantasy" love that line! Keep Writing!!
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Yet again Mahoganyflow
I value and appreciate your comments
~sugar~
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STUNNING WRITING
STUNNING WRITING!! VERY VERY SENSUAL, HOT AND THE IMAGERY IS JUST CLASS. THE FLOW IS WONDERFUL TOO. THIS IS A GREAT PIECE OF WRITING THAT YOU SHOULD REALLY BE PROUD OF SUGAR. WONDERFUL STUFF.
WAYNE
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Thank you hun
For reading and your wonderful comment
Love ~sugar~x
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I love this poem. It so full of expression that i CANT even describe. I hope you do GREAT in the contest and get first!
~DAMIQUE~
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Thank you sweetie
Always a pleasure to have you grace my page
LOVE ~sugar~
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And how sweet it is, Sugar!
You devour me knowing I've got a
taste you can't resist
You said it, Baby - for no one and nothing is sweeter than sugar - if you ask me! He! He! GOOD LUCK in the contest with this tasty, tart, and very sweet piece! I just had me supper and now i'm hungry for me creamy and sweet desert.
Peace & love!
Earl.
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Thank you my Swtpoetryman
Always a pleasure to have you stop by
Appreciated and valued as always
~sugar~
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This is truly great. I enjoyed it from beginning to the end. I loved the description of the scene and I could easily picture it in my head. I wish you luck in the contest.
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Thank you so much for your lovely comment
Always valued and appreciated
~sugar~
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awwwww.....
get down now...sis
I like this one...really a lot
you talkin my language now...
Grat write, you done well in this contest.
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Thanks sis
Appreciate you reading
Love ~sugar~
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Beautiful, elegant, which is amazing, as I'm sure with such a prompt many turn it erotic. You manage to allude, but not give away.
Wonderful.
Keep on writing hun
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A pleasure to have you read
Always valued and appreciated
~sugar~
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this is very good! i love the imagery here and not erotic at all..added a little hot sexy part at the end but thats wat made the poem so great..thank u for entering this contest and good luck
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Thank you for your kind comment
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