Black laquered eyes reflecting my own
As deep inside the hunger still grows
The insatiable need to caress
Unblemished whiteness of your soft flesh
I need you by my side tonight
I need you tight in my loving embrace
The charnel house of this halloween night
Nothing compared to the beauty I face
I lower my mouth to brush your rose red lips
Tenderly kissing and tasting your smile
I feel a surge of desire exlode like red mist
As I bite, its your body I will defile
Sated: done, I took you and with me you'll stay
I changed you, I made you, as my graves company
I loved you, so strongly, since before I died
So now we're together in the grim afterlife
A contest entry
- Pictured Inspired Romantic Halloween by Ted E Bare.
300 points, ended October 30, 2007, 3 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Interesting write! Loved the sensuous feel about it. Congratulations on winning the Bronze trophy.

SA4U
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A "grim" but surely sweet sensual take on the picture at hand. Lovely writing. I want to thank you for entering my "Picture Inspired Romantic Halloween" contest.

Ted E

