Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read Contests Groups Learn Forums Store Help
 

Grim afterlife

Black laquered eyes reflecting my own
As deep inside the hunger still grows
The insatiable need to caress
Unblemished whiteness of your soft flesh
I need you by my side tonight
I need you tight in my loving embrace
The charnel house of this halloween night
Nothing compared to the beauty I face
I lower my mouth to brush your rose red lips
Tenderly kissing and tasting your smile
I feel a surge of desire exlode like red mist
As I bite, its your body I will defile
Sated: done, I took you and with me you'll stay
I changed you, I made you, as my graves company
I loved you, so strongly, since before I died
So now we're together in the grim afterlife

A contest entry

Please tell me what you think

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments

  • SecretAdmirer4U
    October 30, 2007

    Edit | Reply
    Interesting write! Loved the sensuous feel about it. Congratulations on winning the Bronze trophy.

    SA4U


  • Ted E Bare gold member
    October 30, 2007

    Edit | Reply
    A "grim" but surely sweet sensual take on the picture at hand. Lovely writing. I want to thank you for entering my "Picture Inspired Romantic Halloween" contest.

    Ted E