one in every room
ticking away quietly
as they hang on the wall
indicating the passing of time
second by second
minute by minute
hour by hour
your life passes you by
Author notes
again, i had writer's block and told my friends to give me a random subject to write about. this is another product of my randomness.
Please tell me what you think
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I like it.
It could be deep. It could just be about clocks...either way it's got a hint of mystery.
Nice job.
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interesting! i wonder what you wrote when i said to write about clocks! love ya always! ~me
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I dont know whats more interesting , the way this was written or everything you didnt say. This could be just about clocks , or something your waiting for ... Keep up the great writeing carlie
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This was cute! Clocks show my time of life....hahaha very good short and sweet cool!
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