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Release Me

Chains of love unleash me
release your grip and set me free
for I have fixed my broken wing
ready to soar again

Braids of the heart unlace me
relinquish control, I no longer want the
ready to face what a new day will bring
find faith in life once more

Let go the ties that bind me
deliver me from love unending
I once was blind, but now I see
found strength were once I was weak

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  • Beautiful-N-Broken silver member
    May 10, 2008
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    Let go the ties that bind me
    deliver me from love unending
    I once was blind, but now I see
    found strength were once I was weak

    It's as if telling someone to let you be free, because you have found strength without them, and you didn't need them after all. Great write.

  • Virgoan
    October 26, 2007

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    This is nice. The first and last stanza captures me. The mid stanza seems to confuse the reader partially. I suggest you re-read and do some adjustment on that part.

    Overall, a nice write.

    Thanks for sharing and keep writing.

    VIRGOAN