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Stars

they're up there
they always have been
always will be
even if you can't always see them
they're still there
much like the spirit of a lost loved one
or a distant loved one far away
they're not there physically
but they're there, within your heart

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i have writer's block and told my friends to give me something random and quick to write about. this is the product of my randomness.

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  • Poet-of-the-shadows
    October 10, 2007

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    He said to her " like the stars I'll be there" she said to him "but the stars are not always there" and he siad in reply " even if you cant see the stars they are there as I will be for you" I love the way you write


  • Cari Cullen
    October 9, 2007

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    awww

    That's great! I keep woundering though when are you going to read mine? Hmmm? LOL nice job this was cute, funny, and intertaing!