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The Misread

My hand
in yours
longed
for love.

Your hand
left mine
for hair maintenance.

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  • PassionsPromise gold member
    October 22, 2007

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    LMAO..this indeed well penned and spoke out welll. This was a great one. Thanks for sharing and best wishes,.

    tory


  • delightfulmess silver member
    October 17, 2007

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    LOL well we do like to look are best
    when the heart is fluttering
    Great Septolet.. thank you for entering


    delila


  • princehusayn
    October 10, 2007

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    Yeah short but Enlightened

    Reading the books the body language the sky and what is not being written or said is difficult if you are very hung up on yourself. If one cares for one one reads. This is short but very pregnant with what it is these days among the children of Adam. Self absorbed we are more on our hair our car our job than on the ones we claim to love. We are all tainted in this respect. Excellent write powerful reminder...