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In my mind, In reality

In my mind, everything I do gets stopped.
In reality, I have alot.

In my mind, I have no friends
In reality, Love will always extend.

In my mind, There isn't a store with clothes in my size.
In reality, I'm not that big and my mind needs to revise.

In my mind, This handsome man says he loves me, then rolls over to sleep.
In reality, This handsome man says he loves me, and is so comfortable and complete.

In my mind, There is nothing for me but a house to clean.
In reality, There is this huge house and I am treated as a queen.

In my mind, I know I should love myself more.
In reality, I am going to start loving myself to the core.

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  • davidwright silver member
    March 31, 2008
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    A very nice philosophical presentation supporting the power of positive thinking. Good write


  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    October 12, 2007

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    Welcome to AllPoetry

    G'day prettilizzi

    Well penned poem here; so raw and complex
    Love the easy flow of this

    I look forward to reading more from you
    Enjoy AllPoetry
    Stay safe
    ~Amanda