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Mortality

Youth fades as quickly
as a snapshot baked in heat
its color washed gray
and cracked as a drought touched land
begging for spring's gentle rain.

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  • PassionsPromise gold member
    October 22, 2007

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    fullof great metaphors and imagery this indeed was well penned. enjoyed the read.
    Thanks for sharing,.
    Best wishes to you

    tory


  • delightfulmess silver member
    October 17, 2007

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    Oh this was very nice.
    Wonderful metaphoric imagery.
    thank you for entering the contest


    delila


  • Disguising Mask
    October 9, 2007

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    nice poem...i loved how you were able to conect life's fragility with photo taking and the way the land is effected by the weather...