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Tomorrow

    Last Night,
I reached for you;
    You weren’t there.
I cried in the night;
    With no one to hear.

    This Morning,
I thought of our time together,
    Looking for evidence,
I searched all my memories,
    For something between us.

    Today,
I thought of being alone;
    Considered my fears.
I tried to make plans;
    While choking back tears.

    Tonight,
I know that I still love you;
    Whether or not I should.
I want to tell you so much;
    If only I could.

    In The Morning
I start my new life…

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  • EmeraldDaze
    October 17, 2007

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    Hmm...I like this poem.I especially like the ending.
    In The Morning
    I start my new life...
    Too many people act like they can't have a new life.


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    October 10, 2007
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    This is really a dipction of life..true life I mean..thanks for entry in montest...


  • Mallig gold member
    October 9, 2007

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    This is wonderful! Emotionally gripping, and beautifully crafted. Loved the progression of the story and the hopeful ending. triciaoriginals said I should check out your poetry, I'm really glad she did!